In my own writing l am careful to avoid using cliches. Occasionally l mess up or cannot resist a bad pun.
Somewhere you succumbed to “you know in your bones” in the context of knowing right from wrong. It stuck out “like a sore thumb!”
Also avoid self-aggrandizing such as l have two masters degrees, particularly when you later refer to the highly educated Nazi who took pride in their “work”!
Otherwise Kudos to you, Steven. We’re really in need of a remedy, but it’s not going to be a quick fix!
In my own writing l am careful to avoid using cliches. Occasionally l mess up or cannot resist a bad pun.
Somewhere you succumbed to “you know in your bones” in the context of knowing right from wrong. It stuck out “like a sore thumb!”
Also avoid self-aggrandizing such as l have two masters degrees, particularly when you later refer to the highly educated Nazi who took pride in their “work”!
Otherwise Kudos to you, Steven. We’re really in need of a remedy, but it’s not going to be a quick fix!
Message heard and thank you. I had retooled this from an article on my legacy site. Shouldn’t have left that it it.